Two-essay practices 1

Practice 1: Should Governments Place Stricter Regulations on Social Media Companies?

English essay

I firmly believe that governments should impose stricter regulations on social media companies because numerous cases of misconduct have been reported in recent years.

First, the rapid development and widespread use of social media have made it difficult to address the growing number of problems associated with these platforms. Social media now serves as a messaging service, a job-search tool, and a shopping platform. It is remarkably convenient to open one app and manage all these activities while enjoying online content.

However, social media users have also become targets for scammers. People who are less cautious are particularly vulnerable and may be tricked into losing their savings.

Second, serious mental-health problems, especially among young people, have been reported worldwide. Anxiety caused by peer pressure and the fear of missing out can lead young users to become addicted to social media. In addition, echo chambers may intensify harmful views and, in severe cases, contribute to suicidal thoughts. Some countries have already taken steps to restrict social-media use by people under the age of 16.

In conclusion, although social media is an important source of entertainment and communication, the problems caused by these companies cannot be ignored. Governments should take immediate action to introduce reasonable regulations and hold companies accountable.

日本語訳

私は、近年ソーシャルメディア企業による不正行為が数多く報告されているため、政府はより厳しい規制を課すべきだと強く考える。

第一に、ソーシャルメディアの急速な発展と利用の拡大により、これらのプラットフォームに関連して増え続ける問題に対処することが難しくなっている。現在、ソーシャルメディアはメッセージアプリ、求職ツール、ショッピングサイトとしての役割も果たしている。一つのアプリを開くだけで、コンテンツを楽しみながらこれらすべてを利用できるのは、非常に便利である。

しかし、ソーシャルメディアの利用者は詐欺師の標的にもなっている。特に警戒心の薄い人々はだまされやすく、貯金を失うことさえある。

第二に、特に若者の間で深刻なメンタルヘルスの問題が世界的に報告されている。同調圧力や、取り残されることへの不安は、若者をソーシャルメディアに依存させる可能性がある。さらに、エコーチェンバーによって有害な考えが増幅され、深刻な場合には自殺願望につながることもある。すでに16歳未満のソーシャルメディアの利用を制限する措置を取っている国もある。

結論として、ソーシャルメディアが重要な娯楽・コミュニケーション手段である事実は認めるが、企業が引き起こす問題を無視することはできない。政府は適切な規制を導入し、企業に責任を果たさせるため、直ちに行動を起こすべきである。


Practice 2: Is Globalization Doing More Harm Than Good?

English essay

Without our realizing it, globalization has brought many benefits to our lives. I acknowledge that it has also caused problems, including the rapid spread of disease, overtourism, and environmental damage. Nevertheless, I believe that its advantages outweigh its disadvantages.

First and most importantly, globalization has made active international trade essential to the modern world. This benefits economic growth, social development, and international relations. Goods ordered from other countries can now be delivered remarkably quickly.

International trade also leads to a second benefit. As countries communicate and cooperate with one another, they can build stronger relationships and foster solidarity among nations.

Finally, globalization is helping transform outdated stereotypes into more modern, equitable, and inclusive values. For example, protests against racism have shown the world that deep-rooted hatred still exists and that people can work together to challenge it. The Me Too movement helped people recognize inappropriate behavior and contributed to improvements in the workplace. More importantly, these movements have encouraged people to raise their voices.

In conclusion, some disadvantages of globalization can cause devastating environmental damage. Therefore, countries must work together for the common good. However, I do not believe that its negative effects outweigh its benefits.

日本語訳

私たちが気づかないうちに、グローバル化は生活に多くの利益をもたらしてきた。病気の急速な蔓延、オーバーツーリズム、環境破壊など、グローバル化には欠点があることも認識している。しかし、私は不利益よりも利益の方が大きいと考える。

第一に、そして何よりも、グローバル化によって国際貿易は現代世界に不可欠なものとなった。これは経済成長、社会の発展、そして国際関係にとって有益である。海外から注文した商品も、今では驚くほど速く届けられる。

国際貿易は、二つ目の利点にもつながる。各国が互いに意思疎通を図り、協力することで、より強い関係を築き、国家間の連帯を促進できるからである。

最後に、グローバル化は時代遅れの固定観念を、より現代的で公平、かつ包摂的な価値観へと変える助けになっている。例えば、人種差別に対する抗議活動は、根深い憎しみが今なお存在すること、そして人々が団結してそれに立ち向かえることを世界に示した。Me Too運動は、不適切な行動への認識を広め、職場環境の改善にも貢献した。さらに重要なのは、これらの運動が人々に声を上げる勇気を与えたことだ。

結論として、グローバル化の欠点には、環境に壊滅的な被害をもたらすものもある。そのため、各国は共通の利益のために協力しなければならない。しかし、悪影響が利益を上回るとは考えない。

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